giantslenate09

Thank you so much. I fixed the errors. I sent my english teacher this and they told me the same thing. I've written 8 chapters and it is funny how ...

It seems you have mixed your There, their, and they're My feet made the stones underneath them move out of they're place as I made my way to my dads ...

Thank you so much for reviewing this i was afraid noone would review this! Haha! Thanks for helping me on the transition between the scene change. I didn't know how ...

The brittle stones in the creek were moving ever so softly, as it whispered secrets--deathly ones--that only it knew. You go from Plural "Stone" To 'it' i believe it should ...

I enjoyed your first chapter. It was really short though. I love how you showed how bad clara's life was with everyone making fun of her. Then the sympathy of ...

The person entered my view, he was an old man. He was carry some meat and a bowl. Do you mean "He was carrying some meat and a bowl (of ...

I think this is a good idea and a great begining but please never use caps when you write. I enjoyed the ending also:)

A really good chapter again. I was still glued to finishing this chapter. Can't wait for chapter 3. I used to be somebody important. I remember that. People used to ...

Easily the best novel I've read on this site so far. At least in the top 3. My favorite line was this: Imagine my shock when Little Balthor popped into ...

One fine day in Obscene Slipper Land, the land of sharp pointy cliffs and icy cold harbors, a mysterious figure, wearing a cape covering its entire body, which was very ...

Have you written any fantasy novels or short stories? What would be your favorite? Like vampires. out of this world fantasy or more along the lines of LOTR? it seems ...

Writers block is every writers worse enemy! What usually helps me is finding a friend and talking about it. eventually you will work past the writers block.

Haha i know man Lauren was telling me all about "Nate" so call me giant or whatever you want. My book has 4 parts. I've finished part 1, most of ...

No, my good friend Lauren2010 always talked about this place and suggested it to me. I needed more reviews on my book. but i used google to find the site ...

In Florida, it never rained. In Vancouver, it did. Alice didn’t like it. In fact, Alice didn’t even know why she had moved to Canada. It rains in flordia. i ...