ghostie

Thank you for your suggestions. I will definitely heed the advice. And apparently 'tinklings' and 'tinks' are not words so I used 'tinkles'. You may be right on that one, ...

Thank you very much for the comment and pointing out my spelling typo.

Thank you.

Thank you very much.

Thank you for the comment. I wrote this three or so years ago so now I see my mistakes.

Hawk- I see what you mean by referring more about the paranormal's hunger and weakness instead of her fearsomeness. I guess it does weaken how the paranormal is perceived. Lavvie- ...