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  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Cereal.

    I didn't have any conscious intentions for this story at all. Not really. 'Tinks' is onomatopoeia. Thanks for your comment, though, I'll heed the advice if I decide to edit.

    Nov 11, 2012
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Cereal.

    *effort.

    Nov 10, 2012
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Cereal.

    Thanks for the comment. I'll keep that in mind if I really do want to creep people out.

    Nov 10, 2012
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Cereal.

    No point at all. Not even intended to put you off your cereal. Just a drabble written in the wee hours of the morning. Thanks for the comment.

    Nov 10, 2012
  • Short Story » Narrative, Other Re: Cereal.

    What's emotional or intellectual about cereal? There was no effect put into this at all, just a quick drabble. But I appreciate the comment, thanks.

    Nov 10, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: The Lost Children.

    Thank you for the comment. The bony knuckles belong to the little boy and girl. They are clutching each other's hands tightly so their hands are tense and their skin ...

    Sep 9, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Paper Flower.

    Many poems I write is inspired by black comedy and primarily features children. Though the characters are children, the black comedy makes it suitable for adults to read too. Also, ...

    Sep 9, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Bad Habit.

    Thank you!

    Sep 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Bad Habit.

    I have a strong dislike towards ellipses. I like ending my sentences in finality even if it is abrupt. Also, I love Sweeney Todd. Thank you!

    Sep 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Bad Habit.

    Thank you!

    Sep 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Humor Re: Bad Habit.

    I am not partial to punctuation at the end of each line because the end of each line is generally a full stop or a comma. I have always written ...

    Sep 8, 2012
  • Short Story » Narrative, Fantasy Re: The Light, Her Children, and Her Doppelganger.

    Thank you very much. I am honoured.

    Jul 8, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ghost Town.

    It is everybody in general. Thank you, though.

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » Other, Realistic Re: Religion supports and destroys the world

    -

    Jun 24, 2012
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Toasted.

    Thank you.

    Jun 16, 2012


Find wonder in the everyday, find everyday language to articulate it.
— Maurice Manning