ghostie

Thanks for the review. With the adjectives, I know it really should be 'bleach-white' and 'black-inked' like 'grass-green' but sometimes the hyphen is void (I assume because of preference). But ...

I never was a fan of punctuation at the end of lines when I wrote this. I'm beginning to remedy that, though. Thanks for the comment.

This story was actually going to be longer, but in the process of writing it, I didn't like it. If I had carried out the original plot, the title would ...

Past tense is used in the first paragraph because I'm referring to the past winters, and how Summer felt in the past years. I actually imagine Kyra whispering the words ...

Thanks.

Thanks. Maybe.

I do admit I wrote this poem three or so years ago when I was dabbling in poetry, so it is old and cliche. And that's fine, I can take ...

A flow doesn't just stop. The rhythm is just disrupted by the choice of words and syllables. I agree that the rhythm doesn't flow perfectly. Also, you don't need to ...

Thanks for the comment and correction.

Thanks for the comment and pointing out the error.

Yes, yes. You have picked out what I was trying to portray -- "not everybody's story is extraordinary, but it will always be extraordinary to the person living that story". ...

Precisely.

The readers can determine where the blood came from themselves, it doesn't really matter. And no, this isn't a personal recount. I wrote this around 1am so I wasn't eating ...

Cereal is like processed grains. In this particular story, the cereal is corn flakes. Thanks for the comment, though.

That's her personal opinion, I respect that. You have your opinion too, and I respect that too. It doesn't necessarily mean one is close-minded.