germsieGal

I liked :) Keep writting it! I'm going into highschool in a year so im kind of scared about it, becuase I know some of my friends will get into ...

Omg it's off of spongebob :D Love this remake of it though! So awesome! :D

Lucy awoke laying on the ground that was still damp with the rainfall from last night. It was just beginning to break into daylight. At first she had no recognition ...

I liked this :) Very good written, i loved when you said: his voice sounded like ice hitting stained windows . I do have a few errors I will point ...

I didn't mean to put that many...how do you delete them??? =[

Thanks for the reviews, I know I have quite the few run on sentences and I am curently fixing them. Thanks RitingFreek! You really helped :D My next chapter will ...

Umm. It felt really rushed, I didn't understand what was happening in some parts, and there is some erros you should fix, and maybe add some more information. So I ...

At the end of Mason Road, lives an old abandoned house. Mr. Mason, who died last year, still haunts the old house. The house itself is in taters, windows are ...

I Like! You're a real good drawer! Keep drawing, you're way better than me :p I love how you added detail to the shirt, it really puts the final touch ...

OMG. I loved this! It was so interesting, I couldn't stop reading it! I love how you made me feel and see what she/he was feeling and seeing, I felt ...

I like it! I will keep reading :D I love the story line! Keep writing!

Good Job! Are you going to keep writing it? I will keep reading :)

Lucy stared into the darkness of the rainy night, her mouth still wet with the blood. "Not again," she thought, "I didn't want to do this again." "Why am I ...