germsieGal

I love this novel so much, you can go very far with this my friend! :) The plot was amzing from the start and just keeps getting better! The picture ...

Thanks for the review! Just so you don't think I'm ignoring your review i haven't fixed my mistakes yet but I will. I just have a lot to do this ...

Wow, this poem was so good! :D I loved the last line, it really tied the whole poem to a conclusion! All her petals have tore I didn't get the ...

Hello again! :) Sorry I didn't realize the second chapter was out!! :p A few things I noticed. I never start a sentence with and or but. It is informal ...

Sorry it's a short chapter :( A pair of red stilettos came into the doorway of the private waiting room Ali and Mitchel were in. She was a young woman ...

Hi and welcome to YWS!! Remember if you do not review others works you will not get reviewed. Usually when writing a story you don't put it in a spoiler, ...

This story is so good, the plot is just amazing and your writing voice is so great! I didn't notice a whole lot of errors. A few places you forgot ...

Looks like I will be your reviewer!! :D I like your writing voice, though I found it confusing at first but I got used to it. Few little errors, they ...

Truthfully I didn't really like this piece, it was to dull for my taste. I think you should liven it up a bit, make it have more spunk! It all ...

I like! it was really interesting and I read it twice!

The council that was sitting perfectly aligned in there chairs were all waiting for the case to begin. All seven of them in a sitting at a long, rounded bench. ...

Wow, that is quite the story. Though it isn't all that short. I would have maybe put it into a short chapter book? Just giving you an idea. There are ...

Yay!! :D I have been waiting! Very good chapter. Nice job with the descriptions by the way! Few errors. Mistakes like always will be in red. As I lay in ...

Hey Welcome to YWS Brie! Hope to read some of your stories! Remeber if you do not review others work, you will not get reviewed! Have any questions? Feel free ...

Omg! I was waiting :D Very cute! I think you should tell us(the readers) what emily looks like, if Jake says she is an angel she must be pretty. She ...