geheim717

I really like the beginning of this story. I agree with other people who have commented that the first sentence is particularly engaging, which is what the first sentence of ...

I really like this poem, you had me from the first four lines. Also, I don't know if you noticed or if it was intentional but your poem fits many ...

Carter winced as his wife dropped her hand bag for the third time that day. She was so full of fury that she couldn’t see straight. He longed to hold ...

I really like this poem, the emotion of the narrator really comes through and it reads really well as a poem too. My favourite lines were: Everytime we spoke, I ...

I really like this poem. This first verse: In a bed of darkness my mind sleeps. Where evil hidesand trouble creeps. is my favourite. It;s a really strong way to ...

I think this is a really nice poem, I'm guessing a lot of people will be able to relate to it who have been in similar situations before, a lot ...

"Dad please!" I pleaded frantically, seeing that this argument was about to escalate into something much worse. "Get out of here!" I said to Luke, my little brother, grabbing a ...

This is a really amazing poem! First of all I salute you, for being able to use rhyme in your poem so effectively without the poem becoming nonsensical. Also I ...

I really like this poem it has a really great flow and has really strong imagery. Although short, in my opinion its very complete and really puts strong images in ...

And the trees I envy them; How they stand tall and proud while their summery world dies around them; in burning shades of red, fiery oranges and glowing yellows. I ...

They say happy endings never happen, that love is just a fantasy. They say no one's ever perfect, or that we should try to change. They say that soul mates ...