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Hey! I'm Amna and I'm excited to be reviewing this post! Derek could feel himself getting stronger as his mouth filled with the delicious taste of blood from the weak ...

HI! I'm Amna and I'm excited to read this! I hope my notes are useful :) Willa curled up in the hospital bed, facing the wall. The last of her ...

Any critique is welcome What do people think about the moment before they die? What thoughts ran through the mind during that second they straddled the thin line between existence ...

Not too crazy. Hehe! Good to know ;) Yikes, I always thought that london was bad!

Sorry, I realized the extract may be hard to understand but it is a key turning point in my book and I needed critique for it! Sorry, got to work ...

It just came in the post today! I cant tear my eyes away so far...

Any critique is welcome. The sun lowered in the sky, an array of colours meshed and it was breathtaking. The beaches were most definitely the best thing about La Pare. ...

These are just my opinions! Do with them as you please. “You’re going out?” He tried his best to remain calm as I shrugged on my coat. “In this kind ...

:elephant: (Okay, that smiley is just awesome) I'm a 17 year old londoner, who always forgets to take her umbrella so I usually feel the wrath of british weather. I ...

I never thought I’d love my grandmother as much as I did now. Staring at her half open eyes, unfocused and hollow, I felt guilt. Guilt for not helping her ...

This was well written! Only thing I would point out is the amount of adverbs you use. When you use the adverb, your telling not showing. Don't worry, I do ...

Well done, I think this was well written. You tell me a lot of things, but I would prefer it if you just showed me! I think you have the ...

Hi! Please take my critique with a pinch of salt :) It is only my opinion! Wrapping her shawl around her slender shoulders, Liana shivered in the chilly beginning of ...

Hiya :) These are just my opinions, so do with them as you please! 1. This is very well written. Your descriptions are captivating and I feel like the story ...

Hiya :) These are just my opinions, so you can completely ignore me! 1. I actually thought your MC age was between 15-19. I figured she might be 17 because ...