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Wow I really like this. There is a lot of emotion and I feel really bad for Samantha. The only thing I can say is just watch your homophones (like ...

Hey there! I really liked this part- I can tell that you worked hard to improve from the from the first part. :) I am sorry that I can't provide ...

Hey there. First off, I really like this piece. The idea behind the puppet strings is a great one. I agree with the person above me about switching the word ...

Hey there Chris! OK first off let me say that I absolutely love this. The description is beautiful and the characters are fantastic. I knew that you were a good ...

Thanks for this. I will keep this in mind next time I sit down to write a haiku. :)

Hey I like this a lot. As the others were saying I was hooked right away and I wanted to know why he was kidnapped. Another thing I liked was ...

Great job describing American stereotypes. It's such a powerful topic and something that should be addressed. The only thing that I can point out is the punctuation while using contractions. ...

Congrats and good luck to the both of you! :)

Hey there! First off, let me say that these drawings are amazing. I have no artistic talent so I am super jealous of your skills. I love the first two- ...

Hey there! I really like this! I can kinda imagine mellow piano for the first verse, drums for the chorus and then like piano, drums and guitar for the rest ...

Hey there! I'm back to post another poem. This was actually one of my NaNo pieces and I would really like to improve it. It's one of the favorite poems ...

Hey there! First off I must say that this was a brilliant piece. There was raw emotion in it, the rhyming was beautiful and didn't sound forced. Plus the message ...

This is so beautiful. I got chills as I read this. Great work! :) -Hope

Hey there! I'm not really an expert on art but I really really like this. The detail that you put in it is incredible and it is so lifelike. My ...

Wow I have never seen nor wrote anything like this in my whole life! In fact I never saw this in class or anything like that! ;) Haha. Well anyway, ...