gamechanger10

I really like the passion and emotion (thats kind of rhetorical) in this piece. It reminded me of a book that I read a while ago called A Stone In ...

Well...I'm not sure what to say about this. As you said to Nolan, you work in abstract, so the concept depends on how it is recieved. I don't think I ...

Okay, so here's the deal; I'm not going to diessect (i spelled that wrong) your every sentence. Otheres have done that enough. :wink: But I will say that several of ...

this poem is to speak. it has a nice, soft flow about it that is--in a way--calming. thats about all there is to say. Beautiful work. Good job. :D

this was really deep. i felt the emotions rushing forward and all that good stuff. there's not much else to say about this piece. as the reviewer prior to me ...

okay, this isn't one of my best pieces, but I'm considering using it at the beginning of a new story, so i need a lot of reviews (p.s.-this is my ...

This was an...um...interesting piece of work... :? you're last line is a little strange and almost awkwardly fitting in with the rest...you might want to rewrite that--if anything. The concept ...

This was a wonderfully written piece. Nice work! there were a few spelling issues that LilSarahBreezy pointed out, but all in all, this was a very enjoyable poem. KEEP WRITING!! ...