gamechanger10

these were very...um...interesting? i didn't like the pokemon one...just because...well...i'm not just didn't pop out to me... anyway, the first two were great. wow. keep it up! -GC10

well, this was definately depressing. other reviews have covered the main issues that popped out at me. the biggest one that i saw--and this is just my opinion--is that you ...

i'm not sure who your basing this off of, but, never the less, nice work. i agree that the hair could use some work...some conditioner, maybe? haha. just kidding. anyway, ...

personally, i was a tad lost throughout this poem, but you concept was deep...i guess... or my level of comprehension is very limited. this piece is very dark, and i'm ...

mucho...umm...bien? i don't know...i can't speak Spanish... that was random. okay, anyhow, i really liked this piece. it was sort of predictable with, you know, which objects you decided to ...

these drawings were great. i'd feel bad if i was too hard on you--seeing as to, i have no drawing abitlity what so ever. i really liked the drawing of ...

wow. this was very captivating. the flow was there, your wording was perfect. the whole poem was flawless and beautiful...and...and...wow...

the only thing that was wrong that i noticed to be a problem was punctuation. and nolan already took care of that. the imagery and thought behind this poem was ...

this was...um...interesting...you have a lot of gramatical errors that i won't go into. you would simply need to go back and you'd notice them. the most reaccuring one was that ...

sapphire took most of the quotes, examples, etc. that i was thinking of using. so, in order to avoid being unconditionally redundant, let me just say that i really enjoyed ...

well, brother, i put off reviewing this for a while because i wasn't sure what i would say. but i think i got it down to the main points. this ...

the best pic--in my opinion--is definitely between the cat and the second picture (first dog one). the dog picture because of the off-centered type approach in it as well as ...

only a few times did you lose the flow, but those were barely noticeable. my favorite was the very first stanza. it was so beautiful. this piece had great emotion ...

North, East, South, and West The wind shall come with it's best Blowing, gusting, shaking the trees Making people weak at their knees. Trees squeal at it's might The force ...

as Angel of Death said, the last stanza seemed to come too quickly--maybe thats because i was enjoying the poem--i don't know. you just seemed to jump from the death--which ...