gamechanger10

as i think i can stated, it's annoying to reader's when you post the whole thing in one giant line. unlike him, however, i read the whole thing. it was ...

this poem was very well written, nice job! I loved the structure of it and the rhetorical questions you used in different lines. your images were really...individual and different. I'm ...

alright, so this was pretty good. i just have a few things to point out. Suddenly I soar away Everything else falls away. Here, you rhymed away with away. I'm ...

the imagery in this poem was great, however, i wasn't sure what exactly was going on when the guy got mad... did she dump him? is he just a freakishly ...

this was straight up amazing!!! i love the shodows you put in...i love EVERYTHING!!! this was awesome! keep drawing! -GC10

this was a great poem! the only moment you broke the flow was in the line that Jasmine Hart pointed out. Aside from that, it was wonderful! the imagery and ...

As I awake to the rising sun, I look out the cold dew-covered window. Cold might not be needed in this sentence. If you take it out, you could either ...

as for slang...american slang, anyway, there's a TON of it... PM me the word you need slang terms for and i'm sure...positive...i'd be able to help you... :D -GC10

i've never heard the song, so i feel sort of...left out? i don't know. things probably wouldn't be much clearer if i heard it. your style is incredibly unique and ...

just to let you know, there is a song by Chris Brown called Wall To Wall, so, yeah. i liked this, though i'm not sure that the repetition of Wall ...

sounds like a cool story. i'll check it out some time. personally, i am not a fan of daniel radcliffe in glasses. however, this is a really cool blend. nice ...

it might be a bit short to be published, but i guess it depends on where you where thinking of submitting it... i didn't read the first one you posted, ...

this is a really great picture. wonderfully taken. however, there are a few things in the background or near it that sort of distract away from the actual tree. i ...

ha. thats really cool. it reminds me of something my friend would do...take the literal meaning of something and draw it... i really liked this. its very well drawn...except for ...

this was light and happy...sort of...if you're not the bird or the fish... i do suggest that you change their expressions. or at least the fish's. it looks a tad ...