gamechanger10

It's not intended to be funny, Bookmarker. Suicide isn't funny.

your rythm wasn't too off. so don't worry. this was a beautiful poem, none the less. with great feeling and emotion. great piece! -GC10

*high fives* That was amazing. I love the colors you used and just everything about it. Excellent job! -GC10

congrats for graduating... you might make it farther than me! haha. good luck on the site! -GC10

wow. this is great. i think that your shading and style is wonderful. not much else to say. Beautiful! -GC10

pegasi_quill, i was simply going off of information i got off of a website that said that rasputin left a letter for the romanov family saying that he would die ...

ok, lea, this was only slightly better than your other one. a few of the lines (eg. even stuck in a hut) seem like you were just trying a bit ...

i've never actually been knocked out for a head injury, but i have had to get my forehead glued together because i got hit in the head by a rock. ...

i'd highly suggest not actually saying that you need reviews in the 'about the authors' forum, because people usaully don't react very positively when you do...

this poem was interesting. it had a good concept, was powerfully dramatic...and just great. the questions you asked kept me reading at a convincibly fast pace. i too, however noticed, ...

syte, bookmarker's in europe right now and can't answer... but he's my twin brother...and therefore, we have telepathic...links...or something. so i'll answer for him: "If you properly read/understood

there were a few moments in this that were semi-funny...if you intended it to be that way...if not...just forget i said that... anyhow, this was lacking originality other than the ...

this was a very emotional piece. nice work. your rhyming was great! and the figurative language was good as well. along with -save-farris-, I had no idea where the heck ...

there wasn't much of a flow to this piece, which is a shame because your wording and imagery is beautiful. that's probably one of the only problems i found. that ...

i agree with hobbes that you have a very deep, intellectual outlook on life for a seventeen-year-old ha! i love how two 13-year-olds told you that! anyway, back to the ...