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umm...okay? Is that telling me not to rhyme? Or that my poem wasn't good because I rhymed?

I agree with sortgurl on where the titles should be located. For the first one I didn't really get what it was for a while...but I'm good now. I'm not ...

WOW! It's great that you got your book published by anyone...though I'm not sure if your family paying the publisher was that great of an idea. I'm saying that just ...

I'd be glad to help if you still need it! I've finished a book recently and don't have much to do with my own works right now... PM me! -GC10

Welcome to YWS, holliberry! First I should tell you that here at YWS, it's a rule that you must review 2 other pieces before posting one of your own. The ...

the first one is definately the best. though, in my opinion, the trees that sort of spread out in front of the barn rather lowly was a tad odd, but ...

yeah...I know...not my best moment in life...

This piece was great! So simple, yet the message was so deep! The flow was great until it got to...wait...I just lost my train of thought... Never mind. The flow ...

This was great! Frightening, but great! Most of the punctuation, etc. was already pointed out. Blink said that the ending was 'very weak'. I think that it was only a ...

This is really cool. I love the light/white color in the pupil. Especially how it contrasts with the dark redof the outer area! The specks to me made me think ...

So, about a year or two ago, when I was in fifth grade, I 'hired' an 'editor' for my book, Fulfillers Unfortunately, our relationship didn't really work out. He didn't ...

yeah, the only place (site) I know of is that thing. *shrugs* -GC10

Okay, so I'm not too familiar with Ireland, but you might want to ask Eimear. He actually lives there. As for the name Deidre I have no clue. I know ...

Hey, Lucy. Welcome to YWS! It's a rule here that you must review two other pieces before posting one of your own. You should go ahead and do that as ...

this was very...interesting. the beginning intregued me...but then toward the end I was just like, "What?" it is extremely abstract, as I'm sure you intended for it to be. it ...