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I'm sorry. Truly, deeply sorry for what you went through. However, this was a deep, beautiful, moving piece full of emotion. If it was horrible, I wouldn't be posting this ...

This was a really deep poem, and has potential to be great. Everybody already covered the grammatical things, etc. I agree with spike that you should add some imagery to ...

Yeah, you might want to get on those reviews. The review/posting ratio here is one post for every two posts. Even if you have already reviewed a few pieces, if ...

I really liked this. It was happy...then sad... Very emotional. The only thing I have to point out is that in the last pair of rhymes, sulking and darling ...aren't ...

As via said, this is just a picture made on Paint that anyone could've done. The idea to make the T a cross was good, but you could've taken this ...

Never be afraid to post something. All of us fellow writers can understand what your thinking and going through and it's not, like we'll full out bash your post...or even ...

This was good for it's length. I agree with Suzanne that maybe you should subtly add in an underlying message or something... Anyway, this had great imagery despite not having ...

I really, really liked this poem! I don't know if it's the contradictions in each stanza, the overall flow of the poem, the whole piece, or the fact that I'm ...

this was a pretty good poem. nice work. just a few the first stanza, gone/wrong is sort of a stretched rhyme. Perhaps change that. I really liked the last stanza, ...

Well, my first story was a bit...odd. It began with the basec idea that I got around second grade, but I never really officially wrote it until fourth. The story--I ...

umm...yeah...

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Thanks everyone!

This is nicerificastical (that's my word, don't steal it)! The front leg is a tad long, but that's okay. I love the coloring. I love the picture! -GC10

hey hey M.J. anyhow, welcome to YWS. Australia is awesome. Good for you to live there... I don't (tears tears). anyway, PM me with any questions! Hope to see you ...