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Ha. No, actually, the MC's a girl. And a straight one at that.

I just edited it. Well...posted the edited version. I decided to turn this into my NaNo for last November, so it's a novella thing now. This is just the beginning.

because we were non identical twins. Non-identical twins are called fraternal. I would know. I am one. :wink: So, yes, sorry, I'm a bit short on time at the moment, ...

This was good. It was very simple, however. I can understand why you may not want to expand on this much more. I can say I'm like that with some ...

Act normal, be happy, Don't let the pain show. So what if you're dying? Don't let anyone know. Stay focused and calm, Just give them a smile. You'll only have ...

This is a beast idea. Best thing today: My cousin and sister putting grapes in my brother's Coke, yogurt and bagel. Sounds stupid, but if you could only see the ...

Summer is for soccer. That is all.

I'd suggest to reformat this so that it's in proper stanzas. I doubt many people will review it when it isn't exactly poetry in its current state. PM me when ...

This is a very strong, meanful poem. Loads of emotion and all that jazz. Sorry, I sound pretty shallow right now. :P Anyhow, this was very touching and conveyed your ...

I really like this piece. It really struck a chord with me. I've recently gotten into cutting and my left arm in particular is really scarred and obviously the result ...

I ate dirt. Haha. No. Kidding. (or am I?)

I vote no. I really strongly oppose this idea. It is unnatural, and all things unnatural alter nature. Humans can only alter nature so much before we completely mess up ...

Well, see, we went over something like this at the beginning of the year in social studies class. I'm not sure what we were talking about, but my class does ...

Aheh. Wow. I feel really stupid right now. I don't know what this is a parody of. Well, I get it's a Poe thinger, but I don't recognize anything. I'm ...

Haha. I love this. It has its rough spots, as previously pointed out. The rhyming does come off as forced at several different points. Listen to the people above me ...