gabriella

So.....from where we left off..... It's still not finished in any way, but hey! it progress! -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

It's so nice to see a happy little story every once in a while! :D This story was very well written, too! It got a little boring in the middle ...

This is only the beginning! Please tell me what you think so I know whether I should continue on with this story! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Hello there! So I love your idea. With some much vampire vs. werewolf stuff going around, it's nice to see one where a person can be a mix. The way ...

All I can say is....i want more! The story had a great plot and It kept me reading. There were a few editing mistakes and just somethings I remember is ...

Sure you can call me Gabby! I completely agree with you on the real person issue. That's why I'm trying to make Amalee a bit bitter about her own little ...

Thank you for the advice! I was thinking the same things you said. I need to work on my vocabulary a little. lol But I will for sure take your ...

Thanks guys for the advice! I'll for sure take it in to account!

"This is the way it is, Arabelle. Get used to it because you can't change it," I said guiltily. It always made me feel so awful to upset my little ...

I love love love love your idea here. I think there needs to be more detail, though. Do you think you could explain the game just a little bit more? ...

Its all as fake as the city we live in. The humble upbringings and slow rise to fame. A lie. No one has to work hard to get to where ...

You definitely have me hooked! The Idea is great and I like how I already have a pretty good Idea of what going on within that short time. There's nothing ...