gabriella

Whoa. This story was captivating from beginning to end. There are no adjectives descriptive enough to explain how amazing this story is. So good. -gabbs

Hey there! So I really really love this story a ton! There are a few grammatical errors, though. For one, I think you were trying to say wiped, not whipped. ...

This story is.....perfect. I can't find anything to review! Your descriptions are amazing and I felt like I was looking at a picture. I think this story needs to be ...

WHAT YOU MISSED "...With that the little girl gave me a quick smile, revealing a missing tooth, and flew away. I stood up on my ledge and pushed myself into ...

This prologue has me interested! I do feel, however, that you need to give a little more emotion. Shouldn't I feel sorry for the victim? Or maybe triumphant for the ...

That smile Teasing Laughing Looking at each other Wondering And knowing Awkward moments Hugs Jokes Thoughts Deep conversations That’s him. Those blue eyes. Enchant Charm Haunt Me That’s him He ...

I'm more of a story teller kind of person, rather than a poet, but I had a few poems taking space on my computer desktop. I thought I might throw ...

hey there! There is just something about a dialogue that is always intriguing. I think if you would have written this in any other form it would have been less ...

Here's a little piece of what you missed.... My mind told the unfeeling body to move forward, and it did, but I couldn't feel the dewy grass under my feet. ...

Thank you all for your reviews! Then next installment is coming very very very soon. After that, I'm putting the two together to make the final story. I'll be sure ...

Hello there! So....uuhmm....I am pretty sure that Rosalie said basically all there is to say. haha The story was an adorable read. I love these kinds of stories that make ...

Hello there! So for starters, I like the fact that I don't know what went on before hand. It gives the seen a little mystery which can be very good. ...

"Morgan," I yelled over the blasting punk rock,"you are going to get us killed if you drive any faster!" Brown strands of hair were whipping at my face. With the ...

Hey there! So I am pretty much a sucker for these kinds of stories! I love your idea! The characters are good and the end is cute. BUT! i think ...

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