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Satire for the win! Good, and the wonderful non-sequitur of the monkey leaves everything open for, well, anything.

Thanks Clau I did know how to spell blew, I just remembered a figure of speech here in England as in "he blued all the money on beer and wenches" ...

Staring up at her window, Every night from the gutter ; All the meals endured Where I blushed, barely muttered In answer to queries of work, health and station - ...

"this is my will so mote it be" - doesn't mote mean a floating speck of dust? I didn't really get this line :) Otherwise it's meant to be a ...

I love this. It's so economical and yet so funny. Not much to crit, then.

I read a statistic once that said 10% of the internet is porn. Yeah, I agree with you though. Most of the stuff is just common sense.

"The songs of the dead are the lamentations of the living" So thought Eragon as he stepped over a twisted and hacked Urgal, listening to the keening of women who ...

"Mr Pailey looked upon his surroundings in a very curious manner" - this means the way he looked around was curious, not that he looked around curiously. I would revise ...

I really liked them as a small child, but rereading them they're really good. What did people think in terms of religious metaphor compared to Philip Pullman's His Dark Materials? ...

I love these books - the whole universe is just so good

I'm new too (and if you spotted that that coulda been a pokemon typo, you're clearly a child of the 90's) Oh, and im living in georgia. I write stuff ...