funkyreg101

This was soooo funny! I nearly peed myself laughing!!! *LIKE*!!!

I really like this, it's really unique and interesting. I love the concept and where your going with it! A few things that bugged me though, previous posts covered most ...

Awww! This is sooooo adorable!!! I love that it doesn't explain whats going on until the end. I was so lost by why it was in italics, I got that ...

I really think it was great. There was a lot of emotion behind it, despite it's shortness. You used great description and had a strong voice. I would like there ...

In my social studies class, we have to interpret these checks and make a narrative story out of them. If you have a better idea of where to put this, ...

HI! I'm Regan. This remindes me A LOT like a mix between twilight and city of bones. Hm. Well I dont know how the rest will play out, so it ...

Hi! I'm Regan, I'll review your peice! Nothing. The only other differences was this large metallic cube sitting in the middle of my apartment floor. Okay, this confused me. At ...

Thanks! I copy and paste from microsoft word, and YWS gets rid of the space between the paragraphs.

R3G@N Here! Corrections in red Things I like in Green *For Skins contest* Title should be: I Never Liked My Name I never liked my name. What kid wants to ...

I lay on my stomach under my bed trying not to breathe heavily. Fear clutched me, seizing up through my veins. Tears were forming in my eyes. I wanted to ...

Hmmm okay. So i could hardly get past the first paragraph. The gramatical errors are everywhere!!!!! Here we go... I will make corrections in red. Ive been working on this ...

Nazar roared in rage. “You imbecile! I told you to kill him!” He bellowed. “I’m sorry, Sir. Please, sir, ‘twas a mistake, honest!” the young man said, cowering in fear. ...

“Here, drink this. It’ll make you feel better,” Jazz instructed Jasper. He did as she told him. Immediately his exhaustion and pains went away. “Now, why don’t you tell me ...

hi! this is a excerpt from my work in progress, well, no, more like a work in idle, but you get the idea. (names are not decided yet) Swallowing a ...

Alright, so if you haven't read my very messy Introduction to the series (it was posted a long time ago) you may want to do that. I haven't edited it ...