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This is the second chapter of my novel Raching to Death. It changes the point of veiw so you're seeing what's going on back in Sami's house! Please comment!!! Enjoy ...

On average, 250 houses catch fire each year due to a Christmas tree. Of these, 14 people on average die. One of every 18 Christmas tree fires will end in ...

Hi I'm Regan! I'll be reviewing your peice! "Amiria!” Someone shouted in the distance. I sighed, why couldn't I be alone for more than a few minutes? I mean seriously! ...

First I must say one thing, I have bad speling, please help. I have a very high vocabulary. So if you find something spelled wrong, sorry. Assassin Prologue The mysterious ...

Hi! Is this going to be part of a novel? If so, you should move it to action adventure novels. It seems more like a fantasy though... with nine year ...

Hey! I'm going to get a lot more nit picky then the others. I do agree though, it was really good. I loved the intensity. Let's start! I strained my ...

I'll try to get one or two in!

Once upon a time in a land called Futhormore, a young girl named Lucy lived in a small hut. She lived a carefree life surrounded by friends and family. Her ...

Ahahahaha Loved it! That was really good!

Thanks for the help everyone! I'm editing the first chapter a bit more and then I'll post another chapter as soon as I have enough points. In the meantime, care ...

Hi! My name is regan, could you review either of the peices of my novel Racing to Death? Thanks a bundle!

Hi! My name is Regan, and I would LOVE if you would review my story! I only have the prologue and the 1st chapter, I'm going to post the 2nd ...

I'm begining to feel obliged to tell you that this is your sixth chapter, but you don't have any comments on your fifth, which you posted before you had any ...

^^Thank's a lot! I kinda realized it's similar to the Hunger Games, but i'll try to lean away from it as much as possible. I'll go through and fix those ...

This is the first chapter in my novel! There is a prologue before this, it isnt' really necessary to read it, but it gives you a little bit of insight ...