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Re: The Mountains
These are really good composed photos. I love the second one, it's really enchanting and has fab structure. I'd advise you to use a bigger flash for low light photos ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: All Dressed in Black -A Ballad
Keep writing songs this was AWESOME! X
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Doodles #2
just as doodles theese are brilliant. you clearly have a special gift for magna. I love them, especially the first one. X
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Love is Kind?
I can honestly say this is very moving. The message is very important and it was very emotional. It was amazing. X
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Nature art!!
wow i adore theese. you clearly have a gift and a very good camera on your hands! i love theese kepp photgraphing X
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Walls
This poem is so capturing i couldn't stop reading. it has a real story to it and it flowed really well. nothing else to say.
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Do you know her?
Heres a tip - when you finish it, don't explain everything. It would give the reader a sort of, oh... As in, that didn't leave the mysterious impression it could ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Undisturbed
Whoa. That was truly encapturing and every single moment was breathtaking. You cleary have a gift for writing. One thing I would say to improve was to include more description ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Pirate Stove
Nice description! I really felt this piece and the word choice was great. As others have mentioned, a story or message of some sort would be amazing. Really good work ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: Can I Forgive You?
Hello! What shall I write about? See, I’ve got this lovely new notebook that Kat got me in Paperchase this morning, because we all went shopping. Maybe she’s not that ...
Mar 28, 2011