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Re: Mona Megan
Hi it's Panda here :D I was blown away when I first saw this. It's unbeliveably realistic. You are seriously talented. The only thing I would say is that the ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Sea John's Girl
Captain John Seaman gazed contently out of the small window in the ship’s cabin. He kept his hands firm on the steering wheel, which controlled his small ship, The Sea ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
Great work, I'm sure your teacher will love it! I definitly do! Very touching, which makes poems like this one very succesfull! I enjoyed it. Keep Writing! Panda X
May 5, 2011 -
Re: The Plague
this is really good work. I love reading about the plague (don't ask why) and this was really satisfying. a great storyline, some well described emotions. Apart from a few ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: YWS Flyer: The Jag Edition
Cooooooooool. I really like this, Jag. Apart from the lighter bits on the D, its very eyecatching. As has already been posted, it maybe would work better as a HUUUUGE ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Forget Me
Fairytale! It's amazing how everyone loves a happy ending, and of course so do I! So cute I could die! I notcied 'teh' spelling mistake and it ended a bit ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Therese and Isabelle
Whoa. This is weird, yet encapturing and something that kept me reading. It has a feel at the beginning that things will not go smoothly, which gets the reader to ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Shout it to the World.
Wow - that made me LOL when I read it! Really good, intresting work that made me want to keep reading. Keep Writing, and you WILL be a star! funkypanda ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Missing Link Prologue and Chapter one
This is great, I wanna read some more now - it really hooked me. I like theese kind of real life stories. Keep Writing and I'll Keep Reading! funkypanda X
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Kingdom of Karta Intro
A pair of strong, rough hands grabbed my trembling shoulders. I was prompted along the looming corridor by overly persistent officers, shoved into a dark, desolate cell. I could not ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Windmills of my mind
Great work! Only two things: 1 That cloud is distracting, although I understanmd you couldn't tell it to move! 2 Maybe a few too many windmills, especially in the back ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: The Eleventh Doctor [pencil]
This is techinically, brilliant, and I agree it is amazing. A few things... 1. His hair needs to be a bit longer 2. The left side of his face blends ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Spiral-Horned Dragon Head Portrait
What do I say? I can't say anything but... Utterly... Fricken AMAZING! The one thing I would say is to make the eyes stand out a bit more, as I ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Athira ~
I first scrolled down the page, and I was like, whoa! Seriously, I couldn't tear it apart to save my life, even if I had to! As this is a ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Disney Doodles
WHOA. These are oustanding. I suggest using darker shades in some of the coloured pictures to make them stand out, and check your proportions. But overall these are amazing. I ...
Apr 2, 2011
