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Re: Rain!
Hiii sudz!! This piece was ok. Of course, you can do better if you try. a Thunderstorm or anything you might be. Do not capitalize the "t". Science explains that ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: memories of high school..
*Hey guys! Well, I have been quite busy these days with school, home work and a novel I am working on. So I am dropping out of the story book. ...
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
oh yes! all the time.....like 24/7 TPBM loves pizza!
Sep 26, 2008 -
Re: Anthoner Part of Life
Hii! great job writing this. This has a really deep meaning. I can't say much. Just that it was really touching, well written and well expressed. I didn't find any ...
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Is it ok to write long stories??
you've been of great help, surreal! Thanks!!!
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
huh?? I hadn't realized it till you mentioned it! The person below me hates Miley Cyrus!
Sep 25, 2008 -
Re: Hi
Hi ATreeah! welcome to YWS!! Need I remind you of our rule to review at least two pieces before making a post.. Please do that.. And of course, hope you ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: Is it ok to write long stories??
So, I am working on my first novel. I want to post the chapters on YWS but I am not confident because its a very confusing plot. I mean, it ...
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: Different Ways of Saying "Said"
Thanks!!!! This was very very helpful!!
Sep 23, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
oops! no sorry.. The person below me is emo..
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: The Shredder
This is other fiction, the first chapter called "How I survived high school." Please, please take a llok at it....Thank you very much in advance.
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Chasing critiques?
This is posted in other fiction...I am not sure if you do that!! Well, can you please try??? Will be appreciated....really need more reviews for this one... thanks in advance....
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: The User Below You...
nope...but wish for one! ????the person below me is addicted to....chocolate?????
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: A New Kid On The Block
Hii Meghna!! I am from India too!!! Great to see you here, Welcome to YWS... 1st of all, its great that you have posted a story in the fantasy fiction. ...
Sep 21, 2008 -
Re: Just to say hello, and Im working this out! Hardly...
Hi mathew! Welcome to YWS! I am pretty sure, you'll love this site once you get the hang of it.. First of all, you need to review/critique other people's pieces. ...
Sep 21, 2008
