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hi there kaylatheyoungwritter That was a good poem...not too great but ok. Here are a few things I noticed. 1) He makes me feel like a real woman ready for ...

Hey there unsterblichkeit36 I absolutely enjoyed reading your poem. The poem was very clear to me since the beginning. I like the way you used simple words to convey strong ...

hi Jaden G. I liked your poem and yes, i do agree with you. (Even though Iam not american or from Iraq) here are a few things I noticed. Their ...

It was good but you mixed up the tense. So I’m on the bus and there were some interesting people on it. Instead try: So I was on the bus ...

“Patricia…” I began but I think there was hardly any sound that emanted from my voice and I don't even think Patricia heard it. Patricia saw me and the knife ...

hii salsahanno! I enjoyed reading this although it was a bit too short to be considered a chapter. Anywayz..i did not find too many mistakes in this one. Try and ...

wonderful poem...really worth reading..lovely!! I love all the words used.. You can trip me when you want, I know you want to be cool. But behind that taunt, I'm all ...

I really loved this has a ver deep meaning and actually made me sit and think. So you're staring at the pills again, memorising how they've helped you sleep, maybe ...

Oh my gosh! I loved it. I ussually feel bored to read long stories but this made me wish there was more of it. I really really enjoyed reading it. ...

Just thought I'd put it up here, I was feeling really inspired when I wrote this. Friends; this is a word which has a very special meaning in my heart. ...

hi there! so I enjoyed reading your poem. Not the best ever but it was good. I would like to point out a grammatical error(or it might have been a ...

hi lucyy. ok, so this is my first review so I will try to be the best that I can. here goes: I enjoy reading the way you describe people ...

It had been a tiring Friday at school. I came home, threw my bag onto the bed and called up my friend. "So, you coming today?" I asked. "Well...." she ...

It was a tiring day at school. i came back home on Friday, threw my bag onto the bed and immediately called up my friend. "so, you coming today?" i ...

hmm...nice one!