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thanks a million for the review. I am currently working on it :)

It's posted in other fiction. It's fine if you don't do it, though. I just want feedback, like how it was and stuff. If you can, please try and concentrate ...

Hello Ryan! Hope you're enjoying out here. As you must have realised, this is an addictive site. You must mantain a 2:1 ratio of revies and pieces you post. Looking ...

“My life is over,” Cheryl wailed, tears streaming down her rosy cheeks. Being dumped by her boyfriend of three years for her best friend just before Christmas wasn’t her idea ...

My cousin questions, “Why are you always grumpy?” My friend wonders, “Would it hurt you to smile?” Instead of always asking me the same question You should search for the ...

Chapter 8 ---------Okay, so most of the comments I got on my previous chapters said that it needed more characterization. I agreed with it and so, I have Edited them. ...

Sup! Great to see you here Raquel. Make sure you have made reviewed two pieces before posting your own. No chat speak, please. Other help- look into the help and ...

I don't think ten is acceptable. Anyway the words ban, right? bang. :)

I finally put a picture after Chirantha's extensive forcing...

Thank you everyone! Sure, I'll work on everything that you've said and I appreciate it...thanks again...I'll edit it soon! :)

Her cackle would light up my day, So did the shine in her eye. I never thought our relationship Would be ruined for a guy. When everyone else turned their ...

No problem! No rush on the reviews...you cant take you own time sweety!

Chapter 7 The results of my exams were smooth. I had gotten great marks and everyone was shocked at how a girl like me could get such good marks. “You ...

sure, I'll take a look at it.....but might take a bit of time, though....

hey lucyy! If you aren't busy these days..I'd love for you to review my story I've been working on.... I haven't had much reviews so I'd love to have one ...