frvrfallenangel

urg...i don't think people are going to like this one... FYI: i have serious punctuation isuues. okay well have fun reading and be mean. Pitter patter Little feet Against the ...

okay these two lines i had a problem with, so maybe you could edit them somehow. Feathers of life, they pour down in raindrops, Showering me with the mist of ...

i loved the ending "Or was I destined for hell?" good job! *gives a thumbs up*

i'm sorry that this is so random, but i'm experimenting with something right now. Please be harsh. Dream away butterfly Dream for your wings Gain all the wonders of feeling ...

it's very nice, but the last few lines seem a little out of place as if you had an idea but lost it along the way.