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Surroundings Surreal I feel as if I am being enveloped into a dark abyss Perhaps it's just me, but the word "by" seems slightly more appropriate here. The contents of ...

AHahahah. I find this discussion endlessly amusing, having been exposed to large amounts of emo poetry, sadly enough. Emo poetry has weird, random line breaks, uses words like "darkness", "mirror", ...

I'd say The Shadow God by Aaron Rayburn. Perhaps you've heard of it - it's practically an urban legend. It is not disturbing because of its content - oh no. ...

Haha. This is HILARIOUS. The whole piece has an amazing satirical feel because of the way you phrased everything rather similarly, as if from the child's perspective. I just love ...

It’s strange, the feeling of not waiting anymore. The average person spends 7 years of their life waiting, you know. Out of my 61, that seems slightly unsurprising. Back then ...

Thanks, y'all, for your words and wisdom. =) Ms. Hart, I'll definitely check out that anthology - I LOVE sonnets. I was tempted to memorize all of Shakespeare's but I ...

Make sure to punctuate consistently. If you're going to leave out the punctuation or something to give the entire poem a dejected air (you also left out capitalization, much to ...

I don't know. It seems slightly choppy at times - the beginning stanza is hesitant and broken for I don't know what reason, but that reason is not illuminated as ...

A grey and blinding fog had settled round A blanket smoth'ring sight and sense alike. And my attempts to reason were unsound I could but stumble blindly in the night. ...