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Ag, I'm an avid sonnet writer. Joy to find one here!! Suggestions: Oh, find a sliver in a darkened place Sorry, but starting with 'Oh' is a cop-out. When you ...

This is me. I am strong, I am brave. I break, I bleed. I hurt, I cry. I can stand against the currents. This is me. Este es yo. Soy ...

The New Rules of High School - Blake Nelson The character was dynamic, but in the strangest way. He came full circle. I put down the book wondering why he ...

Thanks for the reviews, you guys. @...Plant? You signed as that but I feel really awkward addressing you as "Plant"... Anyway, in any case, thank you. I'm going to work ...

Parts stuck out to me, but I do have a list of gripes pertaining to the grammar. You have to be careful when using ye olde english. And now the ...

Hey. First of all, I loved the imagery of the stanzas. The shape is pretty fantastic. I do agree with you - the first stanza is the best. It feels ...

Hey there. I'd be much gratified if you'd review this - Thanks!

Hey. Feel free to tear apart this poem - it's one of my favorite ones I've written, which is why I'm sharing it. Everything can use improvement! Thanks in advance, ...

I really like this. I'm going to be entirely unconstructive, and for that my apologies - but I think this would sound absolutely GREAT over a beat. I adore all ...

Just so everyone knows, this is going to be a duel-perspective piece changing between Landon's POV and Iras' POV. Also, Landon's vision will continue to be expressed. I didn't want ...

The books go unread, the drink half-empty . to complete the parallel, you could make 'empty' a verb! "the drink goes half-emptied"? The music up , all the way, i ...

To see or not to see I only want you? To know or not to know that I - undeniably, with the tenacity of steel - will follow you without ...

Wow. This was pretty amazing. You have a clean, easy-to-read style. It's nice. I didn't really notice that you hadn't said much about Natalia until I read the reviews. But ...

This piece made me feel so stupid. I got through until "I don't need that stupid cane" before I realized that the kid was blind. I love how you focused ...

Thank you so much for your review! Heh. I've never quite been sure on the numbers thing, so thank the lord someone unveiled the mystery at last. XD And yes, ...