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Re: Alchemists 3: Alchemist Tricks
There were a few spelling mistakes. Like this on Candise spelled candis. I recommend you do a draft then read it and correct it on Microsoft word or something. Then ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Alchemists 2: Spirit, Mind, Shadow and a lot of Water
This chapter was great and revealed so much mystery that eluded my mind. I find that each chapter gets greater and greater.
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Alchemists 1: History
I think you did much better description on chapter 1 than you did on the prologue. You made a spelling mistake though.
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Alchemists
It was very exciting for a prologue. Which is good. I think you should give more description. But that isn't really much of a problem. I think it is a ...
Jun 15, 2011