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:) Ha ha, I know I've been thinking of rewriting my whole story from the beginning. Like start it off the first day she woke up till finally the week ...

Wow! Total shocker here at the end! I would have never expected that. I loved the story. Wow, I'm still shocked at what just happened. The only thing I can ...

:) Thannks! And I know ,lol, it looked kinda funny twice, but I was like whatever. I changed it now. And yeah I can hear it in my head as ...

I am also christian, becoming a Jehovah Witnesses :) And I say this world government for men is impossible. For them to create peace, trust, and many others? Many electors ...

Okay, this is a slam poem. I'm sure some of you are familiar with the concept. If not a slam poem is just thoughts, sentence fragments, they can tell a ...

:) yeah, i know! Shading isn't one of my best thing to do as a drawer, so I'm glad it looked at least decent. You like the letters? Thanks, I ...

No, I do not draw tattoos, sorry. But I was planning on it, not anymore though. :) Thanks, Lena. And yeah I know it does look funky I forgot what ...

I'm game! Okay I absolutely love this story already, I know this is for science fiction but change it to romance because I definitely cant wait to see how the ...

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I just started with a line one day, and it ended up like this. I really like it, but I want to hear your thoughts :D. Oh, and this also ...

:) I really enjoyed reading this Chapter of your story, and can't wait to read the rest. I swear if I hadn't gotten off yesterday I would have finished it ...

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This has been revised, and also was the second part of my rough draft. Now there is only one part. Look for Premonition- Nightmare Becomes Reality. Sorry :)

Thats when it happened, a sound like metal hitting a surface. My mind was registering nothing else, but blackness.( What just happened here?)* What just happened here is a mystery ...

Well this is chapter 1 of my story "Premonition" REVISED. I started this during the summer, and surprisingly I continued it. I would really love some tips on how to ...