frenchyrude

thanks for your help :)

It was a story I had to write for english. i welcome critic and comment warmly enjoy :) A woman is in a room with a window and a door. ...

It was really nice and easy to read. You can get got really fast in the story which is good. I just thought that it was a little short. But ...

Thanks thething912 But it look that our friend have already work on that! :) I'm sure that you can find something to correct though. But if you see anything left ...

(I know this may be a bit confusing. If you have any questions, please ask me. And feel free to critique - I won't take it badly. I hope that ...

Thanks!!!! That always nice to hear. I don't hear that often. Ya I do try my best. Thanks for reading my story. :)

hi i was wondering if some one could help me. every time i log in all the settings change in a weird way, and if i want to submit something ...

wow that was really like wow it be nice if there were more detail thought and more information on her roommate but if not it was great i like the ...

Wow that really good. i was can of confuse at the top be at the end i got it all. it a sad but happy story i really like good ...

(Continuation from: Behind the Shadows, chapter one.) I can do this she tried to convince herself. But it was no use the darkness of the forest took all hope of ...

Chapter I The Jungle of Hulm She was running, running fast. Why did he do that? Why, why, why? Irina was running, she was running from something that was no ...

i think it really good but you do need more information on her family. were is her mom? why she didn't call the police when she could? what happen with ...

wow even though it short it really moving. it would be nice to have more imformation on Alan and Sady. But if not it really good. your lucky i realy ...

Hey my name is elysa but most people call me frenchy. as you probably guess im french. i love writing and reading. my biguess problem is that english is new ...