foxy

I think you can add more ideas, try to make them angrier ones. Your theme is pain and anger, thus many ideas could be added. Try to expand your imagination, ...

I thought this poem was a little confusing. Though I did like the way you describe feelings and thoughts. Try to expand it, I am sure you may come up ...

That is me, I was feeling unusually happy, so I decided to capture the moment xD

Yes you did help, thank you for your time. I believe that you can never seek perfection or a flawless piece unless you are directed over and over.

You have put the image of war in a realistic sad way, and I love how your song is split into a male turn and a female turn. It was ...

Oh dear, all those questions would drive anyone to pure insanity. But here is what I shall answer. I live in Canada, Windsor and I study at the University of ...

I keep feeling that you have something missing. Your ideas are great but you don't seem to describe them in the best way. I again advise you to enhance your ...

Thank you, your comments are very much appreciated. I shall see what changes I can do to make this piece better. Thank you again for your time.

What is it that I feel when I look into your eyes? My heart soars, rips my chest, leaves me and flies I never call my heart back, very obscure! ...

awww poor little lady. You have described a disease successfully. With all it's bothering points, and teasing details, I almost got sick myself. Nice work, I enjoyed your poem.

How sincere, only that you have described your own little experience in your own little style, and that does not help many people in relating to your words and images. ...

Ah this is one of the strangest poems I have ever read. But I do admire the way you have described the very little things that amaze a child alot. ...

Can the ocean ever deny the waves? Or the heavens deny the soul they save? May the stars ever deny the sky? Or the tear ever deny the eye? Or ...

wooow there's a fight here. Maybe veil has a point, but I believe you should take into consideration that no matter how convinced you are with your poem, the reader's ...

Aww how appreciative and dearly. However: 1.raise money for the less fortunate----> raising, is the verb to be used here. 2.helps me be----> helps you be what? happy perhaps. 3.speak ...