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Hmmmm this was beyond special! Your description of what you like about what used to be there in our world makes the reader flow along with your imagination. I guess ...

Okay well, I liked this. You asked me to review one of your poems and here I am XD Umm I don't think this was completely frigid or emotionless, I ...

Okaaaay, I looked at the website, and I read your article. Now I'm a realistic rational person and I really avoid discussing this subject... BUT I have to say: Men ...

I made a few changes to this poem. I uploaded it a while back during the writing olympics. Hope everyone enjoys it. Sorry if you've read it before. I notice ...

I really enjoyed the poem, I am sorry I do not have much advice for you about how to improve the poem. I think it is fine the way it ...

awww *hugs you so tight* you are so amazing!!

Aww Isha, that was an amazing review. You gave me a boost of confidence there!

Hey there, Foxy. I won't dig into this as ruthlessly as I normally do because a.) I'm tired and b.) I'm confident in your own editing capabilities that you can ...

Oh shush you! My niece is downright adorable!

Storm A brilliant sun with skies so blue, The day so warm, and flowers in bloom. Clouds roll in, dark and low, The sun now hidden as the rain pours ...

I love it! Love it!! *dances around like a little girl* Nice apocalyptic mood and imagery, beautiful words. Hurrah! :D aww, aren't you a cute little one! I'm glad you ...

What is life without you? It's a heart with no beat, It's a body without a soul, It's a lonely tear soaring to a grey sky. I love you, Like ...

Here are my most recent photos... ....I think they're ugly...

Hey there! You can call me Remrock, or Rem for short. (: I live in a small town in who-knows-where America. I'm a horse freak. In fact, my username is ...

Interesting use of words. I enjoyed the structure of the poem and I enjoyed reading it. Needs some editing, but most of what is needed has already been stated. Although, ...