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(i made a mistake to post it in the wrong genre) The birds sing in harmony. The sun fills the first days of spring. Flowers bloom. The insects fill the ...

this is such a long story... really long... i am wondering if you could have make it short and seperate tehs tory into two parts so that it can give ...

The birds sing in their harmony. The sun fills the first days of spring. Flowers bloom. The insects fill the silent skies from the cold winter. It is such a ...

The only light is a tiny candle. It glows silently on a table top. The fireplace is empty and the only warmth comes from a tiny spark. She shivers on ...

Good story but it is simply confusing with the horizontal lines...i cannot find the line i am reading... That was the only thing i think is wrong becasue it is ...

Okay here is my story... An japanese ESOL teacher is involved in a crime in which the victims are drug dealers. At first she does not mind but as she ...

Thanks for the reply... there is aproblem with the chin...i had a hard time drawing the chin because it was my first time drawing a person in low profile (or ...

The picture is simple and i like the arrangement fo the flower... if only you could resize the picture to make it smaller. It is ahrd to view and see ...

Hi...this the drawing that i made... actually i made her before i made the sleeping princess... so what do you think? i think i amde her hips a bit smaller ...

The story is okay and i like the descriptions and adjectives being written on the story. I like the quotation: She has never slept. She has never dreamt. She can ...

the picture is okay but the nose and the face is a bit too sharp. The fingers are awkward but i guess that the hands are one of the most ...

Name: Janilima Mil Age: 19 Appearance; Red hair with a gentle face and light blue eyes Personality: She is a sweet young girl who secretly works as a prostitute just ...

The New Year starts with a bang. The sound from the church bells fills the streets. People’s laughter and shouts are the norm of the night as the festival starts ...

All in all, the story is good but i kept wondering on why the main character is going to the house. You made good description on telling the events before ...

tHE WRITING IS GOOD EXCEPT FOR THE SPACING. it might be better if it could be divided in paragraph rather than one line. I am a bit confuse on readinga ...