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that is Sheeda! wow my views about her was wrong! i really like the picture except for the facial appearance which to be honest looks evil, i like the movement. ...

ICLiSA "oh my, i think i have forgot to go here. i wonder how long i have missed!" she grabs her two large suitcases from the ground and goes inside ...

name: Iclisa Nadean age: 15 grade: year 10 gender: female Description: long blonde hair with green eyes. He usually wears a green cap and a blue dress that reaches above ...

*grey makes a smile. and thinks (now this is enough. let the games begin)

grey:sure thing! we need more back up here! hurry!

I really like the story. The story consists of a good mood and the details especially the physical description of the character was well done. You have also describe the ...

*Grey looks at teh battle field and see that the abse is outnumbered and getting surrounded. He lifts up his hand and the ground splits creating a larghe whole Grey: ...

It is a beautiful story you ahev grasp the mood of the story by doing excellent descriptions of teh character. though the description of teh actual character was a bit ...

Name: Grey age: 10 magical skills: can shapeshift to anything and has the ability to control objects witha flick of his hand job in war: acts as a spy from ...

name: Atram Dace age: 17-18 gender:male personality: Atram is shy and passive yet he is caring if people gets to know him. He likes to give advice and has a ...

this picture is really cute and awesome though the word of the title in the picture is a bit simple but all in all it is such a cute picture

i am not really into reviewing fantasy but i just saw thsi and got interested okay my first advice is that the story has a good pace with the action. ...

hi, i found thsi and think just to comment it first of all, i like the dialogue. there is a sense of realism in it my comment is that the ...

can anyone help me here... i need some advice to get me out from this writer's block it is so annoying, i cannot just think straight ona good story and ...

good, very good i like this new version. you got the mood, the description in it. you might just need a little more edit (i do not knwo what is ...