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Re: Maiko of Gion
I could already feel the life being pulled away from me. A quick painless death eluded me. I knew, though, that mine would be slow and painful. It was like ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Hunted
Asuka I wlooked at Peyton with a pitiful gazed. She ahs indeed endured a lot. She had witness the death of two of her friends and was saddened that one ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I am a woman of the moon..." Asuka "And, what am i? a sun becasue it has fire..." Maya "Maybe, you do love fire...i'll go to ocean of the air ...
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
i don't get it...what is ADHD I'll give it 5/10
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned for having a game!
Jun 26, 2009 -
Re: High school
Anvie I woke up steadily and strecthed my hands. Finally that was what i called a cat nap. I looked around and was a little puzzled to what had happened. ...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned becasue your avatar is pointing at me!
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"I'll get a tan...i wonder what would i looked like..." Izabela "I'm al;ready tanned...look at my skin...its awesome...though again...burning is a challenge i can't wait..." Jungen "burned probably...
Jun 25, 2009 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
I'll give you 5/10 i like the imagery but the adverbs or adjectives used to describe the scene seem to be overused. i don't get when you mean racing,flying, shooting ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: High school
Anevie i gave a huge yawn before my eyes opened. I scratch the back of my neck tiredly before i noticed that Lee and Jason has left me. i gave ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: High school
Atram i cannot believe what had happened. I stood by my doorway wondering if it was all real. I cannot believe that i had finally danced with a girl before. ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
I'll give you a 7/10. Its poetic and the imagery is there as well it gives a sene of happiness though the communist in the first part seems confusing. I ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Land of Total Randomness
..."there's a banana in pajamas eating t-rex behind you" so the three bananas...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: High school
Anevie the whole night came to life. it was already eight and everybody was already dancing. It felt like friday but it was just wednesday. tehre is still school tomorrow ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Ban The User Above You! [4]
Banned for repeating the word, ban, three times!
Jun 22, 2009
