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okay...the power my character and Theo will capture will be Izzy just do get her inside Schera-hunter We walk silently walking to the Hunter who was at the roof. We ...

Okay…I don’t want to be harsh but here I go. Firstly, what are you trying to convey in this story? If you are conveying that Autumn is dead then you ...

OVERALL...6/10 I DON'T GET IT

Okay basically…to be honest…this story you are simply telling us various facts. In a nutshell, there was no tone, no characterization and you kept telling the readers various stuff not ...

Mad Moo...i think the hunters should work as pairs like last time....if that happens, can my character be the partner of Theo. i can tell that it will be an ...

Iclisa Jackie greeted me to a guy who was wearing black glasses. He must be blind and amazingly, he was able to walk around and do anything. I offered him ...

6/10 for the first one 9/10 for teh second 8/10 for the last

do not tell other people the plot of your will give you less motivation when you are actually writing it it happened to me and it sucks!

my goodness...i know this one and i love it...I'll use a different *can i have an anime picture Name: Schera Shizamaki appearance: long brown hair tied to a ponytail, slim ...

9/10 i like it...its...give imagary

cool but what is the time of the review?? vbecause i might not be in the same time zone??

i'll review this for you puidn...don't worry

Okay you got three characters: Tammy, Lily and Lily’s ex. One thing I like about this piece is on their personality and how their personality varies from each other. For ...

seriously i don't know... but anyway...can anyone join my story book please...please...

*thanks a lot white tiger...i owe you one but i wonder if lizzifer is still here??? *oh i was wondering if we needed some intense drama between our characters *and ...