foxfire

oh this is funny...8/10

i will be leaving for almsot the whole of november due to exams though i will visit YWS for a very quick while sumbitting some reviews but i won't last ...

oh...hi...just want to write...i think for this one...we need some plot plan so that this storybook will not die quickly

i like it especcially the repetition 8/10

i'll save a spot...i will return my character, "Gryk"

granted but when you tried to go near one, a whole army of bees attacked you i wish i can beat the school bully

okay...catholic priest might do some exorcism unless they are sure the people are being possess. I'm catholic and in my former country, there were a lot of story of teenagers ...

...hired an army of devoted biscuits in order to...

okay about your crisis... a possible fault is that you might be too concern in future events...Try not to scheme your future...yes, you may plan what you might do in ...

Being Nothing, Observed So, it’s my first day at this office, my khaki pants and white button up are clean and starched, and everything around me is clean and starched. ...

What I like about this story is that you created tone. Very good, you’ve made the reader feel the story…you perfectly convey the story through the use of diction such ...

here you go, pudin...chapter 2 and part of chapter 3

sorry for the dealy, buggy!! i was out so i cannot use the computer Schera he asked me as if he was dying. "nothing much...i just got control over you. ...

what is that some girl thing you're talking about???? oh...dreams cool...dreams are awesome...what kind of weird dreams...

hahaha...good one...8/10