foxfire

a bit but yeah TUBM needs a job badly

its the eye! the crocodile eye!! 7/10

*finally...after a month of no writing, this is what came up from me. I am not really confident if its all good but i decided to have a go in ...

hehe...i got the same problem as you pal. I'm a bit sick with the modern romances especially the ones in romantic comedy. try having one of them-maybe the girl- as ...

I get what you are doing…you are trying to use an ending as a beginning, write about the past and end up the story with connection with the beginning…clever…However It ...

Comment: Good…Suspense driven story…I like it. The events in this story were connected to each other and flowed easily from one to another and the twist at the end was ...

Okay firstly…the last part of the story was a good way to let the reader stir some interest. Introduction: Not to be harsh but the words, “Here I am, back ...

Firstly, what are you trying to tell in this story?? Are you trying to tell of a story about two sisters who moved to a hotel? As well…what age are ...

ooohhhh...its a flying pig!! where can i get one of those?? 9/10

cool and mysterious! 8/10

haha...true 9/10

Nah...there is no way. well one thing is that it does not mean that when the Mayans said that after the time period, there will be destructions (am i right?). ...

-guys....can i add some action...if you don't mind- felassis as we reached the start of the sub urban neighborhood. I stopped and glanced at the end of the pathway. Beside ...

hehe...i get the message but the last bit is somewhat confuse me...7.5/10

I just believe the church and the bible is just another way someone has tried to control others. before i would point my argument...would i ask you that if tehre ...