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Elfen Lied...a classic...

*This story is a very rough draft...and it was influence by divine comedy...please comments are needed Midway upon the journey, they stumbled themselves in the dark woods by the shore ...

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haha...i'm going to join this...this will be fun favorite colors: Red (blood red)& Blue favorite genres: mystery, horror, supernatural (it does not need to be bloody but maybe comedic) favorite ...

its the hooded one...7.8/10

I think I know what you are doing. You are trying to write one paragraph of narrative then the second which was his thoughts. Okay that is were your problem ...

The concept is good and you started the story at an interesting point however it got somewhat lost when you mentioned the names. Firstly, we do not know which is ...

Comment: Interesting story but… you’re simply telling us various information round it. Not of it is ll true but there was not enough stuff in the actual narrative that enabled ...

butterfly wine...classy...8/10

oh! that dog...i wonder where i'd seen him before...??? 7.7/10

Applaud, Pudin…this one was good and I like it. You gave the reader a sense of mood with the dialogue and the description between the boy and the girl. Just ...

Hey, Pudin…hope I’m not too late. Okay, firstly, the way you wrote the story was like giving telling us the various events such s early in the morning or that ...

It was a good story. I really like the last part of the story where you turned to a flashback and it was cute when both of they were laying ...

hehehe...really...8/10 PS justdance, you did not rate my avatar

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