foxfire

i'm in... Name: Grey Dace age: 12 gender:male weapon: machete SASS: Speed fears: of being wounded...he amke it up for going on berserk random: he first look as a sweet ...

Hello there, pal...foxfire here at your service... welcome to YWS...i hope you'll enjoy here as much as i am... i am glad to review your work and just PM me... ...

okay...i'll tell him, "Pal...did you hit your head into something...you're definetely mistaking something here..." Why do clouds come in funny forms?

what a sweet old teddy...8/10

Hi Wd can you review a short story i had made... its called, Ante-Purgatory

*this is a very short piece, i had made which was based on Dante's purgatorio...which i am trying to explore the idea of a different afterlife...what do you think?? “By ...

hey...its your opinion...,pal...your opinion

This piece is rather curious…firstly you left an open plot here for us reader to find out like if her father divorce her mother or that she is psychologically scarred ...

oh...i have an idea...i got this from a movie called, "run lola run" how about we start at the time that we're actually dying...then just before we actually die, time ...

hehe...nice colors...8.5/10

Hehe…well…this one is indeed is an interesting piece…wow…now I know what you mean by different. anyway back to business…. “She bit her bottom lip, and I could hear the slight ...

The drawing is nice...firstly, the shading is nice especcially the one at the chains. As well, that the expression of her face is nice. As well, the hair or the ...

because the sun is round well sort of How would Obama introduce himself when he goes to your class?

Description: The paragraph, “ It was her worst nightmare. Pink everything! Pink rug, pink walls, pink bed, pink pink pink pink PINK EVERYTHING PINK! Cassandra thought she was going to ...

Dialogue: The dialogue is great. It is effective and realistic. As well, it had helped mould the character of your story, this is a very good thing you have done. ...