foxfire

This is a drawing of a character in my story...well two stories i really like this character and i even made a story just for ehr what do you think ...

It is beautiful... the sketch is just awesome... the pose is good and it looks like the pose for the ehad is a bit complciated but you got it right... ...

The New Year will start off with a bang. People will filled the streets. And even if it was not yet midnight the night was already decorated with different colours. ...

I like the mode this story is... The sad and somewhat scary mood is definetely there. The way that this boy is not notice by people and that he is ...

It was another night. The streets were filled with people wearing jeans and hoods, and the night was shone from the flicker of street lights. I secretly stared through my ...

well...what i want to say is could be a bit better if you add some more description or some emotions to the text. the part where the werewolf found out ...

Day tripper...i like it... though i am confuse what casued him to be angry...i think it gave a series of suspense and some mystery to it. though i admit i ...

Hey...Day tripper... i read your story...i like it a lot... it is simple but it works... though i may suggest that you may need some more description on some scenes ...

Nice...i like the way you give the mood of the story and how creepy it makes. though one comment is that the story is a bit sadistic and merciless. Well ...

well for one thing...the story is sadistic...i can feel the urge of merciless killing... hehehe...good stuff...i like the way you create that kind of mood and the weapon of choise ...

nice story...but the only there is that it wpould be better if there woulkd eb good description of the child and change the baby's cry to child's cry but all ...

its good...i like the way you wrote the story... i can feel the emotion being written down and that the mood was perfect for such a case. i can tell ...

The End is the Beginning Part 1 The Midnight Rain[b] It was a start of a new night. It was like any other night The lamp posts buzzed with a ...

hey!! i just joined this group recently at this website that i found very luckily. i am still used to get used on how to do this but it will ...

Creating characters is awesome i just love how to make them think of their own, act of their own and try to make them like real people. plus, i got ...