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Re: Future Soldier
I definitely appreciate the use of simple words and not overly complicated diction in the piece.. or else I definitely would not have been able to understand... well.. maybe.. my ...
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: No title yet...
Well, I definitely thought you did a good job with character development. By the end the main character was fully developed. I felt like I got a sense of who ...
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: Cher's Tails.
I really loved that piece. I enjoyed the simple language... and how it seemed to fit the dog perfectly while not just sounding like any dog... but a dog with ...
Aug 3, 2007 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Hey, my name is fothi.. I just registered. I will probably hanging around here quite a bit. There used to be a place like this that I went to all ...
Aug 3, 2007
