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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Removed ^^

    I thought the diologue in your spoiler was amazing, you seem similar to me in the way that you like using unusual names for your characters :) Just one point: ...

    Dec 17, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Insomia - Prologue

    Hello! Aquamarine made some amazing points there, especially about the way you write. Isolating the reader is a very easy thing to do when you have a good idea in ...

    Dec 16, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Angels and Vampires: Part 1

    “Lexy! Come here my beautiful. Are you working hard? You know how much your mother had to beg to get you into such a good education. Honey, why don’t you ...

    Dec 16, 2009


It's been many years since I had such an exemplary vegetable.
— Mr Collins, Pride and Prejudice