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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lovers/ What am I to you?

    This is the Lexy poem right? I can tell. Trash the weird rhymes....they just don't work, sorry. How about using other resources (internet, library, YWS) to find original styles of ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Temptress: Prologue

    Didn't I say something? :(

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Werewolf/vampires Chapter 1

    This is a very good example of something being inspired by another book (at least it looks like its inspired by Twilight) but doesn't have any plagiarism at all. This ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Angels and Vampires-Part 7

    Yeah exactly! :D They need to have their say for once.

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Angels and Vampires-Part 7

    “I thought I told you to shut up? Must not have, being nice to you for once.” I hit her playfully on the arm, and she just smiled quickly and ...

    Jan 7, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: The Hunter (first part of Chapter 1)(16+ for language)

    “Fuck’s sake hurry up, I can’t feel my fingers anymore!” “You’ve got the thickest gloves here, so shut up. I’m nearly done anyway.” While whispering this threateningly the speaker, a ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: My First Manga.

    So...here I guess. Image traced from:

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Angel without her wings pt 2 (sorry to my readers, it's 16+)

    Saph/Sapphire When I woke up I found myself in a cave, tied up and a man looking at me. He had red in his eyes and his teeth looked sharp. ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Temptress: Prologue

    Right, okay.... in the heart of New York city Should be New York City , right? That is the full official name, so each word should be in capitals. his ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Archive Re: The Soul Society

    "So, Emi, what's been happening? I haven't been to see Captain Hitsugaya for a while. Why am I needed?" Captain Kaden asked as she walked back down the long corridor ...

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Angel without her wings pt 2 (sorry to my readers, it's 16+)

    “Hi Sapphire!” He exclaimed holding his bags of groceries . Full stop I ran over and took some of the bags out of his hands. I took them into the ...

    Jan 5, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Angel without her wings pt 2 (sorry to my readers, it's 16+)

    Yeah cos I read 18 years old stories all the time.

    Jan 5, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Angel without her wings pt 2 (sorry to my readers, it's 16+)

    Don't say gory, when you post it mark it as '12, 16, or 18.' I personally think this is 16 and over according to YWS rules. Anyway, the diologue is ...

    Jan 5, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Boy Named "He"

    Where did you get the idea for this peom from? Its beautiful! It leaves you wondering 'is his name really he or is it just clever trickery?' Gold star! :) ...

    Jan 5, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Fear

    I love the initial idea of this poem, but I hate the way everyone thinks that in poetry every two lines have to rhyme or the words have to relate ...

    Jan 5, 2010


I would rather die of passion than of boredom.
— Émile Zola