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Re: Live Life.
I really liked this. I liked how you didn't try and push your opinion into peoples head. You were very mindful and subtle when approaching this topic. One thing I ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Tantalize
Nice story, very well written. There are just a few things I would like to point out however. You have random capitalization throughout the article. You were the best with ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Pakistan: Love it or Leave it
This is a pretty good essay but they way you worded a few things confused me. Such as..... If they find the people to be uneducated then they should educate ...
Mar 25, 2011
