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I really liked this. I liked how you didn't try and push your opinion into peoples head. You were very mindful and subtle when approaching this topic. One thing I ...

I was writing an article for a paper and then this happened....... Dear sweets, I am so sorry to say this but I am breaking up with you. You may ...

Would you review this for me please? :) Thank you

Nice story, very well written. There are just a few things I would like to point out however. You have random capitalization throughout the article. You were the best with ...

Very good story! I absolutely loved it. It kept me interested and was written amazingly well.

This is a pretty good essay but they way you worded a few things confused me. Such as..... If they find the people to be uneducated then they should educate ...

That is horrible :( I'm sorry you had to experience that.

Like many others have said; you should make this into a poem. :)

What's got you feeling down :( lmao

This is my first real article so please be brutally honest and review :) Also, if you see any grammar issues please notify me! Today's media is packed with seemingly ...