forest_ofthe_nightingale

I feel like I'm balancing on a fence post, not completely sure if i like/ dislike the repetitiveness. OK, i fell. I like it because I do it sometimes too ...

cowboy hat bleach-stained jeans green redneck shirt bra and underwear (duh!) no socks or shoes (hey- im going line dancing... yeah.)

5/10 ... i guess... what!?!

Just one comment: I feel bad for the girl now. How would you feel if people you didn't know were talking about you to a guy you might/might not like... ...

I am screaming, but I cannot remember why. I feel no pain, no anguish. My eyes are fused shut, unopenable (or so I thought). There is something haunting me, preventing ...

How was I to know That today was to be my final day? That my hours were limited, Torn from me as a thief Would steal a wallet. I thought ...

I was rather confused until I read your subscriptish thing. It was a good idea, but there's no point (in my opinion) to a poem that you can't understand without ...

Two words: No rhyming. :D Please, yours always turns out so much better when rhyming... disappears? Whatever. I'm tired and I didn't like the rhyming. :( I liked the words ...

This can be discussed and thought of millions of different ways, but I think a person can be completely straight. It doesn't mean that you have to hate your own ...

My eyes blur when something hits my head, freeing my mane from the entanglement of the branches. Pain leaves me. I float, peacefully, through the air, though my mind still ...

How do you delete? I hate this poem.

It did not take much for them to abandon me. Just a shooting pain, tearing me away from the lights of my glory. I had been their star, the winner ...

I shake my head, trying to awaken myself from this nightmare, but to no avail. A burning sensation screams up my side and I realize that this is no dream. ...

Wow... um someone's in love with their highlights. Try getting them permanently next time. :D OK, if you're going to ryhme in the first stanza (which was a good effect) ...

I really liked the message your poem sent and your rhyming. Usually i hate it when people ryhme, so good job! However, in the third stanza "claim" and "gem" don't ...