forest_ofthe_nightingale

I agree on the formatting... needs some spacing between thoughts. But I liked it, so good job!

There's a lot of pain and confusion in this poem, so much so that it was difficult to comprehend. However, this can be a very good effect and I enjoyed ...

I can't believe you knew what I was talking about, yoha!!! I freaked out when I saw it this morning but couldn't find words that were worthy of it. :( ...

Apologies for not being picky while I read. :D It seems like most people don't follow grammatical rules, so when there's (finally) someone who expects us to pay attention to ...

How do you describe with words things beyond beauty and grace? Is there nothing I can say that will show you what I speak of? "So beautiful!" you will cry ...

Hello! Welcome! Howdy! Salutations! Ok... I'm good now. Hi!!!

The ending was just kind of like "what? Hold on, I have to reread that". You need to be clearer in your point for writing and make sure readers aren't ...

Had I known, I would've posted this 200 million years sooner. Oh well. *200 million years later* ... I'm ready. I found out where I live and that is Michigan. ...

^^ Silence, by Duskglimmer. I tried to say what hadn't been said! :D

The last stanza was rather cliche, but since your poem was sort of an explanation for the cliched (if you even understand what I'm trying to say) "Silence can be ...

4/10 because I hate boys in eyeliner ( ](*,) ) and its... creepy. 4 points for imagination then!

Sleep found me quickly, a single blessing amist the darkness of the moonless night. I drift among the stars, oblivious to Jason and even to Denise. They cannot enter the ...

CLOTHES!!! er... um... sorry 'bout that. I'll try and restrain myself... a coldplay CD would be wonderful. :D

one comment (besides "hello!!!"): I LOVE YOUR AVATAR AND YOUR SIGNATURE!!! see, you're awesome already. :D

So many memories! I guess I'm biased because I know all the fun attached to this poem, but I really like it!!! Yay you!